The poem forms a continuous pattern at the beginning with three stanzas of couplets followed by one tercet or three line stanza. This is where Gonzalez talks about the sugar industry intimately, personally and at times, fondly: ‘carts laden with succulent stalks’, ‘collected the arrow pollen for so many restful pillows’. The imagery of ‘restful pillows’ connotes the tactile feeling of comfort and satisfaction. His use of metaphors such as ‘iron hard hybrids that broke teeth’ emphasizes personal loss because the cane which, represents the author, goes from being ‘succulent stalks’(soft and fun) to ‘iron hard hybrids’(hard and dissatisfied).
Gonzalez’s use of alliteration is used to further emphasize contrasting emotions as well as the mood which the author chooses to convey. ‘Succulent stalks’ and hard hybrid’ is an example of contrasting emotions; contentment versus disappointment. The mood of the poem is also affected by the use of alliteration when the author writes ‘hustling, hanging around job hunting’, ‘scarred skin and cane soot’. The mood is light regardless of the diction or word choice. The words in this poem are used to connote the meaning that even though the men were job hunting, they were having fun doing so (‘hanging around’) and even though they had ‘scarred skin’, they were rewarded well on payday (‘the