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The first thing I noticed is your thesis.
The thesis statement is supposed to answer the question - you state that Romeo is impulsive, but you don't give any evidence towards that statement. Allude to the examples you use in the body.

2nd paragraph --

"Romeo shows impulsiveness in several instances in Romeo and Juliet, proving that his impulsiveness is a very large part of him as a character, for example when he sees Juliet for the first time at the Capulet party.'

This is grammatically incorrect. Try ".. is a very large part of him as a character. An example of this is when.." or even better "This is exemplified when.."

Noticed a typo that Word may not catch! BY Juliet's beauty.

"Also" works as a sentence transition, but it sounds a little stilted. Try "When Romeo jumps the Capulet's fence, as well, ..."

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This is very good! My only complaint is that you re-use the phrase "stumble and fall" a little too often -- I know that you're trying to tie in your essay to the text, but some synonyms would work wonders.

4th paragraph --

"major foreshadowing to not only Romeo but Juliet’s death as well."

Fix this. The statement is not foreshadowing Romeo, but Romeo's death. Try "foreshadowing not only Romeo's death, but Juliet's as well."

Overall --

Clear up your topic sentences a bit. Go from a main idea and then narrow in, don't just jump right into your topic!

Good essay, but there are a few things that could be corrected.

Let write some loyrics. The only reasoning I did this was to read a essay
Little mix pretend its okay
What would you do? What would you say?
How does it feel? Pretend it's OK
My eyes deceive me, but it's still the same
Pretend it's OK

I remember the day when we rowed all night
I wish that I could get the day back and tell you it's alright
Cause we all do the same thing, we just don't realize
That we're living on borrowed time

What would you do? What would you say?
How does it feel? Pretend it's OK
My eyes deceive me, but it's still the same
Pretend it's OK

I see the light that I'm chasing
A memory, but it's fading
When it's gone I'll be waiting
Knowing it's too late (knowing it's too late)
You chose the road that I'm walking
Now it's your soul that I'm caught in
And you're not hearing when I'm calling
Calling your name

One breath, one step, one life, one heart
Two words, two eyes, new beginning, new start
Too weak, too narrow, too short, too bright,
I'm better with you, here by my side

What would you do? What would you say?
How does it feel? Pretend it's OK
My eyes deceive me, but it's still the same
Pretend it's OK

Nothing here, no one talking, knowing it's too late
But sometimes it can get so hard pretending it's OK
Nothing here, no one talking, nothing's gonna change
But sometimes it can get so hard pretending it's OK

What would you do? (what would you do?)
What would you say? (what would you say?)
How does it feel? Pretend it's OK
My eyes deceive me, but it's still the same
Pretend it's OK

What would you do? (what would you do?)
What would you say? (what would you say?)
How does it feel? Pretend it's OK
My eyes deceive me, but it's still the same
Pretend it's OK

Oh yeah
What would you do? What would you say?
Pretending it's OK
What would you do? What would you say?

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