Lawrence also mentions in his Introduction the elements that a poem about the present should include to make it supreme We can find some, if not all of these elements in the poem, I will mention some of them:*There must be mutation, swifter than iridescence, haste, not rest,We can find mutation of elements, changing from one state to another in the following line of the poem:Glisten as silver, they crumple up (12)The shoulders after dipping into the water, change their beautiful shining appearance to a not so graceful one damped and compressed with water. We can see how a mutation is fast and appears almost imperceptible.
*come-and-go, not fixity,In the fourteenth line: For the sluicing of their rain-disheveled petals we can find an example of how the temporary reality can be changed, it is not fixed. The water or rain will dishevel or tear apart the roses, changing the temporary reality into something completely different.
At last in his Introduction Lawrence mentions: This is the unrestful, ungraspable poetry of the sheer present, poetry whose very permanency lies in its wind-like transit In the poem we can find this wind-like transit when the shoulders, after being described as glorious and beautiful are taken apart very easily by the simple act of dripping in water. This is the essence