To answer your question, he had grammar issues (incorrect use of Subject – Verb Agreement, prepositions, and determiner), inappropriate use of punctuation in complex sentences, several misspelled words, and improper use of word choices to enhance his writing style.
I am sorry to hear that J.V. continues to be disappointed with, and experienced additional undue burden on his job search independently of EC Padial, and Washington Vocational Services. This instance partly gave me insights as to why J.V. continuously came to our appointment unprepared in the anticipation that I would give him additional resources and time to do his assignment. In addition to coming unprepared, J.V. has often not show up for his appointments,