TOPIC 5 :
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Grades encourage students to learn. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
As we all know, in the school, people use grades to evaluate the result of studying process. And it is clear to see that grades encourage students to learn so much. Because it helps students have a specific target, know what their strength and weakness are and try to learn to get benefits that high grades bring to them.
First of all, the most important thing when you start to do something is that you have to make your own goal. Knowing clearly/obviously What you want to achive will help you get/make a clear plan about what you have to do. In the school, the grades play a role as that goal. Once you had a specific purpose you will try your best to reach it.
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Secondly, the second, because grades are used to evaluate your academic result, you will have a/an overview about what subjects you are good at or bad at. This will be useful for you to pay more attention to which parts you are not so good to improve them.
Finally, when you get/obtain high grades in the school you will have a chance to get a good job. When you apply for a job, recruiters usually look at your CV including your academic result first to make a decision if they will give you an interview. The grade is a standar to determine your ability in gaining and understanding new knowledge. So high grades help you have a good quality in others’eyes.
In conclusion, grades help students make an effective approach of studying. Besides, good grades bring students many benefits. That is why grades encourge students to learn so