General Purpose: To persuade my classmates
Specific Purpose: To persuade my classmates Gun violence are increasing.
Central Idea: Too many deaths have been occuring from the useage of guns. I. Introduction a. Attention Getter This year, Januanry 23 of Oakland in Chinatown emerged a extreme usage of gun from a 14 year old AfricanAmerican. The young boy had a agrument with his 17 year old sister because she bleached his clothing and shot many times untill she is dead.
Despite their age, they are not kids nor teens. The young boy recently became a father. b. Thesis There has been a new spread across United States that increases youth crime: its ruthless shootings through the shot of a bullet. …show more content…
Credibility Gun Violence is known as a complicated, controversial issue of firearms in America.
The fact that more than 30,000 gun deaths likely to happen every year. From 2001 to 2011,
California had over million deaths because of gun violence. II. Preview main points: During the 1900s century, gun violence has shown a massive increase of unreasonable deaths. Thus, caused this generation to use guns however the law can prevent it. 1) Significance: Gun usage has been so common that teen crimes occur almost daily in United states. i. Those people, including teens use guns whenever a stiuation cannot be solve through words so whoever has a gun is easily able to shoot. ii. To carry or own a gun, citizens express the lack of trust in their enviroment. iii. Family and friends is a huge reflect on the teen. Its the comparsions of good vs bad and right vs wrong is not fully taught to teens. 2) Cause: Many Gun owners is recklessly taking advantage of the dangerous weapon.
Most gun owners sought the weapon as a toy to defeat. i. In June 2010, the U.S. Supreme Court ruled (54) that Chicago 's ban is unconstitutional. ii. As of 2012, 40 states in America are shallissue states that is righttocarry …show more content…
Accrodingly to a survey in March 2013, 56% believed that gun crimes has increased. Data collected in 2011 shows that guns are the cause in 68% of murders, 41% of robbery offenses and 21% of aggravated assaults nationwide.
3) Solution: The only solution is to urge upon the law to prevent gun ownerships. From the 1990s to 2000, United states has the culture of violence: Gun crime.
i. Suspending gun owners who used the weapon wrongly will be the first step. ii. Parents and school should fully eduacuate the kids about Gun violence and Self control. People who used guns wrongly and killed someone must pay their time regradless of age. iii. Approval of use and own guns should only be limited to police officers ect. III. Conclusion: Today I expressed why the usage of guns is dangerous.
a. Review of main points
1) I mentioned that too many gun crimes occured so commonly even upon teenage kids.
2) They werent taught on the consquence of violence; but learned how to handle a gun.
3) Therefore, the solution of the problem must prevent gun ownerships and useage from commoners. b. Final Plea: We all shall contribute to oppose Gun control and will reduce gun violence.