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Halloween Narrative
The Ghost of Halloween

It was the night before Halloween and a 10 year old girl who had long brown hair and pretty blue eyes lived in a little town west of Cleveland, Ohio in the year of 2006 and she was trying on her new Halloween costume. She had best friends named Emma and Jack, who are twins, and were both three months younger than her. They had jet black hair and brown eyes and they were going to trick or treat with her at exactly 9:00 tomorrow night. Amanda was going as a graceful moon princess, Emma was going as a beautiful star fairy, and Jack was going as a brave black lion.

Earlier that day they met in Amanda’s kitchen and they had planned out their trick or treating rout, first they would go to their neighbors the Petersons, next they would go to their friend Eva’s house and then the rest of the neighborhood.Emma had said, “Let’s go down to Mr. Barley’s house too!” Then Amanda had said, “Are you CRAZY Mr. Barley hates kids!” Next Emma said, “Why do you always have it your way!” Suddenly there was a cold wind that blew and Amanda fell over, then Emma said, “Amanda, Jack are you guys ok.” Then Amanda said, “Yes, I’m ok, but what was that?”

Then Amanda saw a faint white ghost just as she got to her feet and she almost screamed, but she didn’t. Finally Jack said, “Emma’s right, so it’s settled that we will go down to Mr. Barley’s house.” But Amanda still wasn’t sure what had hit her. This year would be very different
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But Amanda stayed calm and said to the ghost, “Who are you.” ( as she peered in the giant house seeing about twenty ghosts) and the ghost said softly, “I am Severous, the leader of the ghosts.” Severous was a long white ghost, with glittering eyes and spoke as softly as velvet. Amanda wondered why she was so scared before and why her friends were so afraid. Suddenly Mr. Barley came to the door and yelled, “WHY ARE YOU HERE!” and Severous flew away. So Amanda ran off too, and left her candy bag for the

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