Hi Kem Figurative Language

Hi Kema, awesome story and even greater courage might I add. Your paper clearly has one of the three topics mentioned in the rubric, the ideas are clearly developed and connected, it held my attention, has an effective beginning and ending and also has closure. Its not confusing or leave me wondering, it describes a particular character, setting, event and place. It has an authentic voice and the description goes far beyond common place, typical and mundane to create a convincing, creative, perspective from the narrators viewpoint. This piece had very vivid, figurative language that possessed concrete nouns, active verbs, and adjectives that made the piece interesting and held my attention as I sat on the edge of my seat. The spelling, grammar,