How Does Dorian Gray Respond To Hedonism

My poem, “Dorian”, responds to the character, Dorian Gray. My first stanza of the poem reflects Dorian's character.

Dorian Gray was terribly egotistic,
After reading the yellow book he was very Hedonistic.
All he cared about was his vanity,
After that, he started to lose his humanity.

My poem explains how Dorian is egotistical and thinks his vanity is very important.He gets introduced to Hedonism which is the theory that pleasure or satisfaction is the goal of life. When Dorian lives his life for pleasure he loses his morality and becomes unethical. He gains a bad reputation around London.

After seeing the portrait he pledges his soul,
Which then shows him his heart is as black as coal.
All of his sins are recorded on the canvas,
This makes