from bad behavior…. she’d become more noble” (Eggers 331). This change in Maes’ lifestyle is her feeding into the myth that knowing all her actions are being monitored she will make better decisions and be a better person. Her relationships with her parents, Annie, and her ex boyfriend Mercer suffered greatly for it. Even so much her parents alienated her and didn’t want to be apart of this community and lifestyle of being totally transparent. Their privacy was more important to them. Demoxie was created to bring all of society together even the government to channel all information into one source. It in a sense traps everyone to be totally vulnerable with all his or her personal information and lives regardless of who you are or where you are in the world. “ He truly believes that openness, that complete and uninterrupted access among all humans will help the world. That hits is what the world’s been waiting for, the moment when every soul is connected” (Eggers, 488). Taking away the right to privacy, shouldn’t that be a crime? (Insert topic sentence)
from bad behavior…. she’d become more noble” (Eggers 331). This change in Maes’ lifestyle is her feeding into the myth that knowing all her actions are being monitored she will make better decisions and be a better person. Her relationships with her parents, Annie, and her ex boyfriend Mercer suffered greatly for it. Even so much her parents alienated her and didn’t want to be apart of this community and lifestyle of being totally transparent. Their privacy was more important to them. Demoxie was created to bring all of society together even the government to channel all information into one source. It in a sense traps everyone to be totally vulnerable with all his or her personal information and lives regardless of who you are or where you are in the world. “ He truly believes that openness, that complete and uninterrupted access among all humans will help the world. That hits is what the world’s been waiting for, the moment when every soul is connected” (Eggers, 488). Taking away the right to privacy, shouldn’t that be a crime? (Insert topic sentence)