However, I believe that in the effort of making the book simpler for younger audiences that Mr. Shields has neglected to make the novel more captivating by use of his writing style. For Example on Page 152 when discussing Gregory Peck’s arrival in Monroeville to study his character, Atticus, in the film adaptation of “To Kill a Mockingbird” the author writes: “After an hour or so of conversation, Nelle offered to take Peck on a short tour of the square with a stop-off for lunch. The weather was brisk and overcast, but Peck, dressed in only a lightweight suit, gamely followed Nelle, who was wearing parka, jeans, white socks, and sneakers, around town until they arrived at the Wee diner.” Although this selection is grammatically correct and has no visible errors, it lacks substance and bores the reader with seemingly unimportant, trivial facts about what Nelle and Mr. Peck wore on an uneventful walk to a local
However, I believe that in the effort of making the book simpler for younger audiences that Mr. Shields has neglected to make the novel more captivating by use of his writing style. For Example on Page 152 when discussing Gregory Peck’s arrival in Monroeville to study his character, Atticus, in the film adaptation of “To Kill a Mockingbird” the author writes: “After an hour or so of conversation, Nelle offered to take Peck on a short tour of the square with a stop-off for lunch. The weather was brisk and overcast, but Peck, dressed in only a lightweight suit, gamely followed Nelle, who was wearing parka, jeans, white socks, and sneakers, around town until they arrived at the Wee diner.” Although this selection is grammatically correct and has no visible errors, it lacks substance and bores the reader with seemingly unimportant, trivial facts about what Nelle and Mr. Peck wore on an uneventful walk to a local