Cummings effectively makes this poem into a song through clever uses of punctuation and flair, which help the song flow like a song should in parts . For instance, when he uses the accented ‘é’ in “wellbelovéd”, it adds a subconscious musical note to the rhythm of the piece. Furthermore, the lines “straightway the silver bird looked grave/(departing hurriedly to shave)” (17-18) provides another example of Cummings’ ability to create a song out of a poem. An example of a more traditional flow in this poem is when he writes “Olaf(upon what were once knees)/does almost ceaselessly repeat/“there is some shit I will not eat”” (28-39), which contains too many syllables to fit into a conventional song’s rhythm, so these lines are interpreted as a poem rather than a song. The entirety of this poem is written in an unusual form of meter called iambic tetrameter. This meter has a very strict pattern, which Cummings uses to represent the strictness of military orders, and. Furthermore, most of the time when Cummmings uses parentheses, it is to represent a side note, which is typically difficult to do in a song, since a lengthy tangent can disrupt the flow, as “Olaf(being to all intents/a corpse and wanting any rag/upon what God unto him gave)” (12-14) does in this particular
Cummings effectively makes this poem into a song through clever uses of punctuation and flair, which help the song flow like a song should in parts . For instance, when he uses the accented ‘é’ in “wellbelovéd”, it adds a subconscious musical note to the rhythm of the piece. Furthermore, the lines “straightway the silver bird looked grave/(departing hurriedly to shave)” (17-18) provides another example of Cummings’ ability to create a song out of a poem. An example of a more traditional flow in this poem is when he writes “Olaf(upon what were once knees)/does almost ceaselessly repeat/“there is some shit I will not eat”” (28-39), which contains too many syllables to fit into a conventional song’s rhythm, so these lines are interpreted as a poem rather than a song. The entirety of this poem is written in an unusual form of meter called iambic tetrameter. This meter has a very strict pattern, which Cummings uses to represent the strictness of military orders, and. Furthermore, most of the time when Cummmings uses parentheses, it is to represent a side note, which is typically difficult to do in a song, since a lengthy tangent can disrupt the flow, as “Olaf(being to all intents/a corpse and wanting any rag/upon what God unto him gave)” (12-14) does in this particular