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Though, this does not affect me directly it is important due to the fact it will affect the society I live in. This is almost soundly done until reaching the last paragraph where the weakly based quote concluding the article has me questioning everything stated, due to its unfocused nature. Thus, I do not think it was smart of Schulevitz to include such a weak ending, taking away power of her whole argument, rendering the effectiveness of her article to fall seemingly short, losing focus of the purpose and the crucial