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“The Poisoned Fish” Journal #2 The article “The Poisoned Fish” by Ken Macrorie is about a way of writing called Engfish. Engfish is the way students have been conditioned to write that, in a way, hinders the creativity in their writing. It is when students write exactly what they think their teachers want, in terms of grammar and word choice, and quit writing with their own voice. Not purposefully, but I am sure that I have written Engfish before. When you know what a teacher wants, it is hard not to just write exactly what they want, and ignore the possibility of taking risks and writing in your own style. This is because in most classes that’s exactly what it is, a risk, and most people don’t like to risk their grade for creativity’s sake

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