The author spends the entire paper defending organized religion instead of going into how religion affects the brain. If a cult commits mass-suicide, showing an example of a church that doesn’t kill themselves doesn’t take away the fact a group of people were all driven to suicide because of religion. There are deeper factors in play involving the human psyche and the author's failure to account for how examples like these play into mental health and religion is what ultimately makes this essay an ineffective
The author spends the entire paper defending organized religion instead of going into how religion affects the brain. If a cult commits mass-suicide, showing an example of a church that doesn’t kill themselves doesn’t take away the fact a group of people were all driven to suicide because of religion. There are deeper factors in play involving the human psyche and the author's failure to account for how examples like these play into mental health and religion is what ultimately makes this essay an ineffective