Using Microsoft Word’s review comments, make all corrections to your paper. Remember, stating “add comma here” is not an appropriate correction. You need to say WHY you are adding a comma here. Also, you need to complete the revisions to 5 of the 6+1 writing traits below. Please HIGHLIGHT these changes in your essay. You need to PRINT OUT your corrections and turn them in on the due date. Each trait is worth 10 points. If you do not complete the revision, you will receive a 0. Remember, I do NOT accept late work.
Ideas-Find another example in your story to support one of your literary element.
Organization-Create stronger topic sentences and transitional statements in your essay
Sentence fluency-Change four sentences in your paper using these sentence structures: 2 compound-complex sentences, 2 complex sentences
Word choice-Change 10 words in your essay to make stronger word choice Conventions-Fix all comma errors and state the rule—REMEMBER I did not say every time when you did not use the proper comma rule.
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Using Microsoft Word’s review comments, make all corrections to your paper. Remember, stating “add comma here” is not an appropriate correction. You need to say WHY you are adding a comma here. Also, you need to complete the revisions to 5 of the 6+1 writing traits below. Please HIGHLIGHT these changes in your essay. You need to PRINT OUT your corrections and