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Literally Revealed: A Short Story
I AM TRULY EMBARRASSED!!! So, there was this guy I was really interested in and for a long time it seemed as if he wasn't interested in me. When I smiled at him, I wouldn't get a bad look from him but a face a no emotion seemed worse. Anyway, time went on and we would see each other say "hello." nothing more. This one particular day he driving past me walking home he asked if I need a ride. Not only did I think he was too fine, but I would like to be in a warm car since I am freezing. We talked for a little while the conversation got so good we went somewhere, parked up and talked for a minute. I don't remember how we got on the topic of him being sexy in my eyes but I remember saying it and I remember the smile that went across his face. "You liked me that much and ain't said shit?" I just shrugged and held my head down he chuckled , lifted my head up and kissed me. Dead ass kissed me lips so sweet. I felt like he was smooth af. Okay , so I've been circling and its time to get down to the point. We start going at it in his car and honestly, I'm all for it. I'm giving him head, and he just keeps pushing my head down. I can't even breathe I come up for air but I go back at it... but so does he! Pushing down my mutha fucking …show more content…
I want to start by saying you should stayed around to see what he wanted to do about his car even though I feel as though it came with the nature of the situation. You have to understand that other people value their things and you should value them as well. I felt as if I should mention that because when I was conversing with a male friend who attends Morehouse he stressed to me that if you did choose to write him he could want you to pay to clean his car. I DOUBT that. However, its possible. I feel like you should reach out if your embarrassment really has died down and you can laugh at the situation when brought up. (He'll bring it
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