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This story is about trust in relationships. This a story about a girl in 8th grade she is new and has no friends yet. It was very hard for her to make friends even though she spoke perfectly good English and blended in well she was still ignored because she wasn’t known. She finally made her first friend who introduced her to other people who are his friends. They eventually became very close friends throughout the year she made great friends she went into high school with. During the summer both teens still had contacts. He had feelings for her but she had no idea he was trying so hard to get her but she was just clueless. As school started she saw him as a best friend and he saw her as more that that….way more than that. He asked her out and she said she had to think about it. She was very young but not an idiot she made it clear to him she doesn’t want these silly high school relationships that only last a month and that she wants years and if he is willing to do that, he was so into her he agreed to anything. They were the cutest happiest couple at their school.
They were together for their whole freshman year then sophomore year came along she thought everything was great she loved him very much but he wasn’t happy anymore he saw new faces new girls he was starting to loose interest and she noticed that and to make him realize what he is going to lose she didn’t fight it, she started flirting with his boys and he was jealous every time and when he complained about it she lets him know why she is acting that way he understands and stops with his behavior throughout that year he changed he wanted to explore he started smoking , drinking partying and she is nothing like that she tries to stop him and he just asks her to join but she doesn’t his grades dropped her grades didn’t she was always angry or depressed because of his behavior she couldn’t handle it she wanted to end it because his behavior was affecting her grades as she ended it they didn’t speak to

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