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Peter and the Seven Enchanted Trees
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Rafael Navia

Peter is a very poor young man that leaves his house to find fortune. He starts a journey and met some friends. He will need his friends and his good intentions to overcome the obstacles that life have prepared for him.

Peter: A young man with a very big heart.
Old man: A powerful wizard who owes Peter a favor.
Athos: A very strong man, and a friend of Peter who owes him a favor.
Drako: A man who can drink an entire lake, and a friend of Peter who owes him a favor.
The Bees: Very hardworking bees friends of Peter and owed him a favor.
The King: Selfish and arrogant king who creates a contest to cut down the seven magic trees.
The Witch: Evil witch who cursed the king’s castle and seeks revenge.

Along time ago in a place very far away live an old farmer and his son Peter. Peter is a young and strong man with a very big heart. They are so poor that if one of them brings home a piece of black bread they will celebrate for days. One day the old man tells his son that he has to leave that miserable place and go find fortune on his own. Peter leaves the old man’s house with great sorrow in his heart. Around there also lives a great king in his amazing castle. The king’s guard one day capture a very powerful witch and he decided to burn her at the stake. Just before they set her on fire she curses the king’s castle from getting sunlight ever again and then she disappears in the thin air. After that seven gigantic trees with very thick branches grew from the earth and covered the entire palace denying the sun’s heat and light to touch the building. The castle became a very dark and cold place; the only way to keep it a little warm and lighter is with thousands of candles everywhere. This king could not stand it anymore and created a contest. The person who manages to cut this magic trees down would receive half of his fortune, two thirds of his lands and will marry his
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