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Max And Blade Revealed: A Narrative Fiction
Max felt like she had been flying forever. The whole thing kept on playing again and again in her head. How she got out, what Blade said, her new flock, and escaping the lab. It all went like this.

Max and Blade were dating for a while. She never knew it was a setup for some idiots in white coats who were always carrying a stupid clipboard, studying her. She never knew that Blade was working for the other side. She thought he was a kid that also lived at the lab. One day Max was let out of her room by accident and she overheard everything, from how she was being studied, to how it was all a setup. She was devastated and didn't know why she was being studied, but Blade had seen her. Max ran back to her room, then opened all the other rooms.
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”Sirens. They know we’re gone.”

Angel was looking around, “Robots and… humans.. Come on let's go!” she said and flew off as we followed.

“Fang! Come on!!” Nudge said,

“I’m not going with her!” Fang complained,

“Look, let's just all get along enough to save our butts here!!” Angel screamed,

“Fang. Just come on.” Max said and she flew over but halfway through, Something, or someone flew into me. Max looked down at Blade. He had his favorite hunting knife with him. We were falling to the ground and he was trying to kill me. Max went for it and she got it, but she couldn’t remember anything after that, except that Blade was lying dead on the floor. Blade’s hunters stopped, in shock, and flew off, except for one robot who was trying to take Fang away to where they were going. Max flew up and stabbed the robot in the head and he fell. She looked at Fang “Where is your fighting will?”

Fang stopped looking at me and looked at the ground. “Well I.. uh.. Eh.. you.. Thanks”

Max smiled, “Come on, you Potato Head.”

Nudge thought out loud, “Where do we go to now?”

Angel agreed, “Yea, I mean, our home is gone. We can’t go back.”

Gee spoke up, “It’s the first place they're going to
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I wanna get a dog!” Nudge begged.

“PLEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASE?!” Angel and Nudge begged,

“PLEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASE?!” Angel, Nudge, and Gee begged, again.

“PLEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASE?!” Angel, Nudge, Gee, and Iggy begged,

“PLEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASE?!” They all screamed.

“Please?” Fang asked.

“PLEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA--” They all begged but Max interrupted.

“FINE! WE’LL GET A DOG!. DOG OR CAT OR BOTH.” Max screamed.

“YAY!!!!” Everyone screamed and she rolled her eyes.

“I’m gonna get a cat and a dog. I’m going to name the cat Jessica, and the dog Jake!” Nudge bragged.

“Me too. I’m gonna get a giant schnauzer and a main coon. I’m gonna name the schnauzer Jack, and the cat Jordan.” Gee bragged,

“I’m going to get a white cat and name it Angel, and then a little black Scottie and name it Total!” Angel said,

“Total?” We all said.

“What? What’s wrong with that?” Angel complained,

“Uh, nothing, you can be as creative as you want.” Max chimed in,

“I’m going to get a Black German Shepherd and name it Delgado and a Black cat and name it Wolfie.” Fang said, and then they all looked at

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