In the book Bird by Bird by Anne Lamott, she writes an excerpt, Shitty First Drafts, which is about the impact and importance of the first drafts of writing. Anne explains in the beginning of this excerpt that all writers write shitty first drafts and the drafts get better as you write more and work on the writing more. Lamott claims that “writing is not rapturous,” she explains that the only way that she can write anything well is to write a very bad first draft and just work on fixing that. She explains that sometimes you just have to type and get your ideas written out to be able to write a good piece of work. Once someone has been writing for so long, they have to have the ability to be able to just trust their writing process and understand that the first draft isn’t going to be perfect. Nothing is perfect on the first try, you have to keep working at it. Sometimes the first draft will be the worst thing someone thinks they have ever written, but they just have to go back to it and try to make it better and revise what is wrong. A writer has to start somewhere and they work from there. Just because the first draft is a bad draft doesn’t mean that the final work will be terrible. The first draft is the terrible draft, the second draft is the slightly better draft that has been picked through lightly to better, and the final draft is the “dental draft.” The dental draft is the draft that you really pick through and make sure that everything is perfect. In other words, the final product is checked “dentally” to make sure that it is “healthy” so that the final product is perfect. Lamott’s entire excerpt is just explaining that whether or not your first draft is perfect or not, the final product will definitely be better and more acceptable.…
High school can be a great experience or a terrible one. Some people come in and pass all of their classes in flying colours and have a lot a lot friends, others however come in and fail all of their classes and are an outcast because they have a hard time with it. In the movie mean girls and the novel speak the main characters have about the same experience. The stories even are parallel to each other. The three main similarities of Mean Girls and Speak are the Main Characters; Melinda from Speak, and Cady from Mean Girls…
Soaked, little, and naked is how the viewer finds Susanna in the middle of Girl, Interrupted. Or rather, soaked, little, naked, and hysterical. A state James Mangold utilizes to further illustrate his message. The film serves as a vehicle for Mangold to discuss madness and the society it exists within. Valerie, the asylum’s registered nurse, throws Susanna, the film’s suicidal protagonist, into a tub filled with water in order to snap Susanna out of her depressed state. Susanna lashes out at Valerie with every hurtful vulgarity she has within her. Despite this, Valerie remains calm and collected. In this interaction between Susanna and Valerie, madness is portrayed in its most basic form; it is an ongoing battle between the individual and the environment surrounding it. The individual is a victim of his environment, overwhelmed into regurgitating the detritus surrounding him that are readily filtered and suppressed by those deemed sane by society.…
I do agree that this is a false cause, using a professional swimmer to show that their subs are the best is a very good example. Also using by using his mother this makes emotional fallacy. This is a great example as after this it leaves people thinking that to be a good parent or if I want my child to succeed then I must feed them Subway. This is far from the truth. Furthermore, with the popularity fallacy they say that all it has people believe that all athletes are doing it so why shouldn’t I eat Subway? In the movie Mean Girls they do use the poisoning the well fallacy, but this is not an advertisement. With the Pedigree dog food commercial it does use appeal to pity by using the dogs that look so sad. However, they do help these dogs,…
Mean Girls, written by Tina Fey and directed by Mark Waters, takes its viewers through high school from the perspective of Cady Heron, a young girl who never known what “high school” genuinely meant. Upon arrival, she makes friends with Janis and Damian, who were in the stereotypical “unpopular” crowd. They warn her to stay away from “The Plastics”, an exclusive clique that includes three drama-filled girls who are superficial, spiteful, and have vicious attitudes that obtain their power and fame from beauty and glamour. However, “The Plastics” ask Cady to join them. Cady, Janis, and Damian together plot against the leader of The Plastics, Regina George, the most monstrous of them all. In reality, the more time Cady spends with The Plastics, the more she starts to actually become one. The Plastics themselves show how monstrous qualities are formed in celebrity culture, while the use of Cady is the perfect example of how culture builds up celebrities to break them back down. The Plastics took Cady, someone who was naïve and candid, and turned her into something she is not through the manipulation of their own standards and rules. Celebrity culture heavily relies on qualities of manipulation. This was done through thru burn book, etc…
I believe the main character in the film to be Cady Heron who is played by Lindsay Lohan and is a sixteen year old girl. She was homeschooled her entire life until now. I would place Cady in the Adolescence stage of Erikson’s theory of development. It is described that the basic conflict in this stage is identity vs. role confusion. In this stage teens need to develop a personal sense of self and personal identity. If one is able to succeed it will lead them with the ability to stay true to their self. Failure to do so leads the individual to role confusion and a weak sense of self.…
In Part One of Gone Girl, titled “Boy Loses Girl,” the chapters alternate between the perspectives of Nick Dunne, the main character, and Amy Elliott, Nick’s wife. Nick’s chapters focus on present day, while Amy’s chapters are her diary entries from the past, integrated into the story to give insight on her overall personality and her feelings towards their marriage and relationship. Nick’s present day starts with Nick waking up in their rented house in Carthage, Missouri, his hometown. His narration explains that he and Amy moved back to his hometown after losing their New York magazine writing jobs, also because of his parents’ dying condition. Though today was their 5-year wedding anniversary, Nick expresses…
The graphic novel I chose to read this summer was Girl In Dior, by Annie Goetzinger. Aside from two graphic novels I read in elementary school, Drama and Smile, both written by Raina Telgemeier, this was the first graphic novel I had read in quite some time. I enjoyed reading Goetzinger’s novel. Girl In Dior was a very different book in comparison to anything I had read in the past. Goetzinger was able to give her readers a view of what the post-war fashion industry was like in France. The reader followed journalist, Clara Nohant, as she wrote her first article, which was focused on a controversial clothing collection released by fashion designer, Christian Dior. Goetzinger’s images were what made this book spectacular. All of her illustrations were incredibly detailed and filled with vibrant colors. It was evident that she had both an understanding and appreciation for what the women of this time period wore, and that she was passionate about sharing her story through her pictures. I was also very interested in reading this novel, since I had just completed my U.S. History project on a similar theme. I studied the extent to which World War Ⅰ and the Women’s Suffrage…
“Jock”, “prep”, “loser”, “geek”, “criminal”, “ popular”, are just a few labels of teenagers that are used everyday by outsiders who judge them without looking skin deep. In the matter of stereotyping, some may perceive it as being the base of an identity in the view of society. Stereotyping is categorized and used as a positive view. As opposed to the film The Breakfast Club, that creates a more negative input on stereotyping. Peer groups have really changed over the years in a High school atmosphere.…
Nick Carraway, the narrator, has recently moved to get his career started in New York. Nick moved to the West Egg also known as the “new money” island which is across the East Egg known as the “old money” island where his cousin Daisy Buchanan lives with his friend Tom Buchanan. Tom is cheating on Daisy with a lady named Myrtle Wilson and only Daisy and Mr. Wilson are unaware of this.…
One of the biggest influences on students today is the media. It is obvious that shows like South Park, Beavis and Butthead, and The Jersey Shore have a negative impact on student’s goals or morals. Programs like Jackass and Nitro Circus make it seem like being a total moron and doing crazy stunts will ultimately get you paid. Unfortunately there are hardly any shows that portray academic success as the “cool” thing. Even shows that may seem harmless like Drake and Josh for example have a character that is a slacker who has many friends and is considered cool. While the other character that is smart has no friends and is a “loser”. Television tends to use the same formula constantly where athletic types are part of the in crowd and again the smart characters as “nerds”. Sure shows that are informative or constructive such as Extreme Makeover Home Edition on HGTV or Curiosity on History have positive messages but they are not really after young viewers. The glorification of sports in the media even has a major negative effect. With athletes being paid millions of dollars sports often become more important than academics. When In reality only an extremely small percent of students will go on to get paid for any type of sport. Music generally by rappers promotes a life of crime where selling drugs and gangbanging will make you a millionaire. With music videos that have half naked chicks and huge…
The movie Odd Girl Out showed me taught me how high school is for girls. It really showed me from their point of view how tough it could be. It taught me that bullying really needs to be looked into more (which it has) on both gender sides. For boys all we do is go straight to being physical and that is more obvious, so the administration can handle those unresolved issues easier. On the other hand for girls it can be quite tough because they play a lot of mind games. They use different tactics like alienating someone or making up rumours. It is harder for teachers to figure out this is happening since it isn’t so obvious. Since I watched the movie I become more aware of the issue of bullying because what media puts into our heads is that there is just physical bullying, but their isn’t. I have noticed in the younger grades there is a lot of bickering and rumours spread around. You don’t see it as much once you reach secondary 5 but it can still happen. I also learnt from studying people at RHS that it can be quite hard trying to intervene in a fight just like the movie. Sometimes you don’t feel like it’s your place to do anything. I felt that I could relate to some of the characters. I have had friends who have struggled with themselves. By either doing drastic measures to their bodies by cutting or completely changing how they look. Also I related because Stacey pretends that nothing is wrong and tells that to Vanessa then she gets all happy and leaves that’s when Stacey talks behind her back to Nikki. Everyone has a friend like that who is very likeable (Stacey) but then talks behind their back. If I could put myself in one of the characters place it would defiantly be in the spot of Principal Jessup. I believe that she could of stopped the problem at its roots instead she let it grow into a huge dark time for Vanessa. Even if something is not physical most people have common sense when someone is being completely harassed to the point where Vanessa didn’t want…
To some extent, I agree with the statements made in the article, but at the same time, I disagree with the reporter’s views and opinions.…
Mainstream media such as movies and TV shows are two things that really influence children and teens alike. Directors and creators tend to forget about how they portray races especially black people. Many shows and movies often lack representation for black people or they tend not to show us in the greatest light. With having so much influence on small children and teens like myself it plays a part distilling internalized racism in them especially if they can’t see themselves as Queens or Heroes.…
Not far into the movie they show a scene of girls in gym class, all wearing shorts outside except one, Michelle. Which is nothing wrong with that, but what happens is the teachers makes a comment on her wearing sweats, telling her she needs to join the rest of the girls, by wearing shorts. Otherwise, by her not following these instructions, it would lead to a drop in her marks. Michelle to me seems like an insecure girl, not wanting to show her body off. And no school I feel would make girls who are insecure about their body have to feel uncomfortable by wearing shorts, just because every other girl in class was confident and wears shorts.…