Move On Law: A Case Study
Initially, I had the idea of using MYKI fines as an example of social control mechanism in Melbourne, however due to the lack of scholarly literature and evidence in its disproportionate use on young people, I decided not to focus on this. Through discussions with my peers, there was a suggestion on my essay plan to focus more on the ‘move-on’ laws in greater details, as opposed to comparing it with the ‘lockout’. This advice was used to improve the arguments of my essay, as I was able to go in depth with the analysis of ‘move on’ law and its unfair targeting of young people.
Moreover, I have improved my essay arguments by extending my research of ‘move-on’ law to include other Australian states, instead of narrowing down my focus on Victoria.