Murderer Narrative

I am home alone, and I hear on the news about the profile of a murderer who is on the loose, I take a look out the sliding glass doors to my backyard.
And I notice a man standing out in the rain.
He fits the profile of the murderer exactly. And he is smiling at me,
I gulped, picking up the phone to my right and dialing 911. I look back out the glass as I press the phone to my ear, and notice he is much closer to me now.
I dropped the phone in shock there are no footprints in the mud.
It’s his reflection... 10 hours earlier
I woke up early for school
“Oh shoot I forgot to do my homework for Mr.Schmidt”
He’s going to yell at me! So I did the homework. “I have it all done” I said.
So I walk to school and I was early for the first time. I
So I sat down in my chair. And Mr.Ferrer said, “why didn't you bring your chromebook”
And I said, “ I left it charging at home.”
Which I lied to him because he’ll get mad at me and yell, so I continue doing my work and the bell rang for second period and I went to the GYM.
It was okay because we had to run like always…
“Today is not my best day,it's not even a good day, IT A BAD DAY!.”
I said. “Third period was great because The Legacy youth project or know as LYP.” “We all had fun because we a had team building activity.” I said
5 hours later “Yeah!! school is finally over.” I said. My mom came and picked me up from school and said “that they're going to be out of town for tonight and that i’m going to be home alone just for the night.” In sarcasm, I said “yaya your going to be out all night and me home alone and doing nothing.”
We made it home and they had everything ready.So my parent left at 9. So I watched the news to see what’s going, and I hear on the news about the profile of a murderer who is on the loose, I take a look out the sliding glass doors to my backyard.
And I notice a man standing out in the rain.
He fits the profile of the murderer exactly. And he is smiling at