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My Business Letter To Dick's Sporting Goods
Reflection Geoff Brosch 1/17 2B I have chosen two of my works to edit and revise to make it free of errors and perfect. My business letter and process essay, the works I have chosen, are very similar to each other. These two pieces are my favorites that I have picked out of my W.I.P. file. The letter and the essay both blend with a favorite subject of mine. They both involve sports. I love sports, including baseball and football. My complaint letter to Dick’s Sporting Goods shows a lot of my tastes and interests in life. My concern is about a depleted supply of sporting goods. My complaint I stated in my letter is an actual thought of mine. I chose my business letter because I think people should
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