My Writing Reflection

In my writing there have been a lot of approval with especially these parts of my writing focus and idea, and development and support and last but best organization. I'll start with my improvement in these categories.then i'll go on to say what was hard in them that i found difficult.

first i'll start with focus and idea i think that i have improved on having clear focus. My focus was like the first paper karen dog wrote let's just say it was all over the place.here is an example of my writing before this class “he kept on fishing. when she woke up she was in her bed and the smell of cook fish was going into her nose. when she came down she saw a large plate full of the ceah that hunter caught so she came down and sat at the table and then she saw hunter he said that “how was your nap” she smiled” taken from survival island by andrew walcker. As you can see i jumped around alot. Now i want to talk about what was the hardest to learn for myself probably write a topic sentence “My family is a strange bunch in the sense that we don’t fight
Im my opinion the hardest thing that i had to learn to do was write a insightful conclusion. For example, “My dad did not freak out, he just went and helped. That is a short version of my family. “My dad did not freak out, he just went and helped. That is a short version of my family.”.i'm not not saying it's the best ending to the family paragraph but i don’t think its the worst but i do think that i have improved in it a little like this “Over the amount of a month I had to deal with the fact that my grandma had to get revived and was passing in and out of concourses, so I know that my time with her is coming to an end. Family to me is good time and bad related and not related.”. I think that is a little better than what i