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Nimbus And The Sork Alternate Ending
PARTLY CLOUDY ALTERNATE ENDING By: Kayla and Corinne

Nimbus made a porcupine and the stork delivered it. When the stork returned Nimbus made a shark. The stork refused to deliver the shark and left Nimbus all alone. Nimbus sighed as he saw stork fly away.

“Did I do something wrong?” he asked himself. He sadly continued to make more dangerous creatures because that was the only thing he could make. As Nimbus looked at the other clouds he saw stork look back at him, but stork kept flying. Nimbus cried, “Stork, come back!”

As stork flew he looked at all the happy clouds and the beautiful creatures that roamed the sky. Stork thought to himself, “Do I really want to leave Nimbus behind?”
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The next day Nimbus thought it would be a good idea to go out and look for stork. As he was happily floating through the sky, he looked and saw how happy the other storks were and felt bad for the creatures he had given his stork. He realized his creatures were dangerous and their creatures were beautiful things such as puppies, babies, and kittens. “ I am just a mistake.” He shrugged to himself.

When Nimbus set out on his adventure he met other clouds just like him. The only problem was he felt left out because they all had storks, but he did not. As he went forward some he started to give up because stork was nowhere to be found. Nimbus started crying and did not notice that the town below him was getting rained on. “ Why is this happening to me,” Nimbus cried to himself. “ Why why did this have to happen to

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