So we chose to incorporate words such as, “And the judging kills me everyday” and “I want things to change” to indicate that the tone is annoyed. Next, we chose to include words such as, “I am treated fairly” and “I like it this way” to express that the tone is also grateful. This poem’s sensory details were also influenced by our tone because it affected the way that we described the surroundings and how Paul as well as the Tangerine kids felt. For example, we used the words “like a puppy, soft and sweet” and “I am a fierce, forceful, and fearless animal” to add sensory details that sound annoying and grateful. The figurative language in our poem has changed because we had to associate words that would be a simile, metaphor, hyperbole, personification, or even alliteration. Lastly, some examples of figurative language that we used in our poem is “everyone in the world,” this says that the person was talking about a lot of people and not necessarily everyone in the world, but a lot of people. We also used “judging kills me,” which can inform the audience that the person is annoyed by everyone judging them because of their
So we chose to incorporate words such as, “And the judging kills me everyday” and “I want things to change” to indicate that the tone is annoyed. Next, we chose to include words such as, “I am treated fairly” and “I like it this way” to express that the tone is also grateful. This poem’s sensory details were also influenced by our tone because it affected the way that we described the surroundings and how Paul as well as the Tangerine kids felt. For example, we used the words “like a puppy, soft and sweet” and “I am a fierce, forceful, and fearless animal” to add sensory details that sound annoying and grateful. The figurative language in our poem has changed because we had to associate words that would be a simile, metaphor, hyperbole, personification, or even alliteration. Lastly, some examples of figurative language that we used in our poem is “everyone in the world,” this says that the person was talking about a lot of people and not necessarily everyone in the world, but a lot of people. We also used “judging kills me,” which can inform the audience that the person is annoyed by everyone judging them because of their