I agree one hundred percent with you when you say that the sentences from “Once More to the Lake” were very long and confusing. It was for this very reason I chose to write about “Androgynous Man”. While “Once more to the Lake” was very well written compared to “Androgynous Man”, it was just too hard for me to understand at times. I like when things are short sweet and to the point. I feel like in “Once more to the lake that E.B White was trying too much to sound sophisticated. Don’t get me wrong his story really painted a vivid picture to the audience reading it, which is excellent. A killer for me though is some of the wording used. I do not enjoy having to stop in the midst of reading to look up words, because I cannot understand
I agree one hundred percent with you when you say that the sentences from “Once More to the Lake” were very long and confusing. It was for this very reason I chose to write about “Androgynous Man”. While “Once more to the Lake” was very well written compared to “Androgynous Man”, it was just too hard for me to understand at times. I like when things are short sweet and to the point. I feel like in “Once more to the lake that E.B White was trying too much to sound sophisticated. Don’t get me wrong his story really painted a vivid picture to the audience reading it, which is excellent. A killer for me though is some of the wording used. I do not enjoy having to stop in the midst of reading to look up words, because I cannot understand