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What is school? It is an institution designed for the instruction of students under the direction of teachers. It is a place to go to gain knowledge and skills to access the possibilities for having a productive future life. It is considered a safe place to go and get the fundamentals necessary to be properly educated. In the recent years, there have been several mass shootings to occur at schools. Violence has become increasingly common now in schools .Students and faculty no longer feel safe at school.. So this has brought forth a question to parents, students, school and government officials about what should be done to ensure m the safety of students and administration at schools. I believe something definitely has to be about it, Howcver, I do not agree with one idea that our legislation is considering.
I do not think teachers should be allowed to carry weapons at school. What is school? It is an institution designed for the instruction of students under the direction of teachers. It is a place to go to gain knowledge and skills to access the possibilities for having a productive future life. It is considered a safe place to go and get the fundamentals necessary to be properly educated. In the recent years, there have been several mass shootings to occur at schools. Violence has become increasingly common now in schools .Students and faculty no longer feel safe at school.. So this has brought forth a question to parents, students, school and government officials about what should be done to ensure m the safety of students and administration at schools. I believe something definitely has to be about it, Howcver, I do not agree with one idea that our legislation is considering.
I do not think teachers should be allowed to carry weapons at school. What is school? It is an institution designed for the instruction of students under the direction of teachers. It is a place to go to gain knowledge and skills to access the possibilities for having a productive future life. It is considered a safe place to go and get the fundamentals necessary to be properly educated. In the recent years, there have been several mass shootings to occur at schools. Violence has become increasingly common now in schools .Students and faculty no longer feel safe at school.. So this has brought forth a question to parents, students, school and government officials about what should be done to ensure m the safety of students and administration at schools. I believe something definitely has to be about it, Howcver, I do not agree with one idea that our legislation is considering.
I do not think teachers should be allowed to carry weapons at school. What is school? It is an institution designed for the instruction of students under the direction of teachers. It is a place to go to gain knowledge and skills to access the possibilities for having a productive future life. It is considered a safe place to go and get the fundamentals necessary to be properly educated. In the recent years, there have been several mass shootings to occur at schools. Violence has become increasingly common now in schools .Students and faculty no longer feel safe at school.. So this has brought forth a question to parents, students, school and government officials about what should be done to ensure m the safety of students and administration at schools. I believe something definitely has to be about it, Howcver, I do not agree with one idea that our legislation is considering.
I do not think teachers should be allowed to carry weapons at school. What is school? It is an institution designed for the instruction of students under the direction of teachers. It is a place to go to gain knowledge and skills to access the possibilities for having a productive future life. It is considered a safe place to go and get the fundamentals necessary to be properly educated. In the recent years, there have been several mass shootings to occur at schools. Violence has become increasingly common now in schools .Students and faculty no longer feel safe at school.. So this has brought forth a question to parents, students, school and government officials about what should be done to ensure m the safety of students and administration at schools. I believe something definitely has to be about it, Howcver, I do not agree with one idea that our legislation is considering.
I do not think teachers should be allowed to carry weapons at school.