II. Body Paragraph- Support #1 A.Simon tried to behave civilized, while others began to let savagery overcome them.
B. Simon helped Ralph try to make the uncivilized, remote island civilized with little,to no help …show more content…
1. “We need shelters….All day I have been working with Simon.No one else.They’re off bathing,Or sleeping,Or playing”(50,Golding). 2. Ralph is explaining how no one else wants to help try to make the island more suitable for survival except for Simon which shows that they are the only two people that are trying to make it a civilized place. C. Jack begins to let savagery overcome him by hunting for pigs as a sport rather than for the safety and wellness of the other children on the island. 1. “‘You and your blood,Jack Merridew!You and your hunting!We might have gone home.’”(70,Golding). 2. Jack was so focused on proving that he could kill a pig,he let everyone down by not focusing on the fire that could have lead to rescue. D. When you make choices, it can help or hurt an entire group of