Paper Strengths And Weaknesses

One of the main strengths I had going into this paper was the background knowledge I had on the subject. For better or for worse, I have learned how to deal with death on many levels. Although it is something that you can never get used to, it is something, however, that I have dealt with in a better way. Another strength to my paper would be the use of my sources. I felt as if they fit properly, and were worded correctly. A weakness that I feel my paper suffers from is the use of preachy-ness. I feel as though I am doing more preaching than explaining, but at the same time, I was just trying to give advice on how I do things. Another weakness that I believe my paper has is the transitions between paragraphs from biological death to psychological
death. I should have done a better job with the transition, rather than jumping from one to the other. Overall, my biggest concern for my paper was the content that I left myself with. Towards the end, I struggled to come up with topics to write about, even though it is a rather broad subject. If I were to write this paper again, I would have done a better job at explaining what other cultures around the world do when someone passes away. In the end, I’m happy with the time and effort that I put in to this paper. I believe that if the reader can connect to what I wrote about in any way, than I did what I set out to do.