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‘’Time to get up’’ whispered mother.
“Ughhhhh” Paulis groaned. Paulis was a very curious kid about his childhood and he always felt as if his mom was hiding something from him.
“Mom,’’ says Paulis, “ could I talk to you after school about something?” Mother thought for a moment “Uhhhh sure’’ she replied. Paulis didn't like school at all. He was a quiet kid who didn't really talk to people much. At lunch he always pondered about his dad and why his dad left him, and always felt lonely without him. When Paluis got home, he whimpered in his room.
His mother walked in and asked “What's wrong hun?”
Paulis didn't talk. There was dead silence for a couple moments. Then finally Paulis rose up.
“I want to meet dad” he squirmed out of his mouth.
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When Paulis went back upstairs he had a plan he was going to make the formula and when his dad comes that night he shall dump it on him and turn him normal again.
The night rolled around and it was 12 o'clock, he had his formula all ready he just needed to set his contraction up. His plan was to tie a string to the door that leads to the cup of the formula and once the door opened it would fall upon him.
“Tick tock tick tock” the clock spoke, just as if another person was talking to him. Behind the door Paulis heard noise, he froze for a minute then the door creaked open, there was a small crack the size of a pencil led.
“Haha” laughed the father “I suppose u forgot I can freeze time didn't you” he laughed. All of a sudden Father rose the water with his powers and carried it across the room into Paulis’s mouth. Paulis couldn't breathe his eyes were getting darker, and darker until his last breath left his body. Paulis was lying there like a dead deer on the street.
Father hovered over his body and laughed “Now I see why they kicked me out of this

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