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HELP, PLEASE HELP! IM LOST SCARED someone....Please....im very afraid.. oh mother i'm so sorry... MOTHER.... NOT SO SORRY!

I curled my tail over my nose, still awake from what I experienced, I can still hear the screams of them...all of them I just want to be with mother father brother and sis I miss them all.
The only things around me are the whispers of the wind so dark too dark reminds me of when he showed up, just exactly on a night like this.
He was like nothing seen before, I still can see the blood on his paws, and the red eyes that lit like spark. I told mother but did she listen, NO! She nevers listens to me, and she will never listen to me now that she is DEAD! Like father and brother sis, no one ever escaped him before but me!
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"hey do you like blood?" I felt his presents as he shifted back uneasy, he said in a soft quiet voice "yes" my eyes were hot "well it's very good I am not the only one looking to seek blood on my paws....tonight" I said
I turned around and sprang right at him and clawed, it felt really warm and sticky I spoke "well there you go all the blood in the world, and it's the blood of
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Years went by and when it was time Eyesbleeds mother Blowskies decided to move
'you sure its alright to leave his home like this?" the father Lonlyhook asked
"yes he will eventually forget everything when we start our new future somewhere else" she whispered.

Eyesbleed hopped excitedly of getting a new place he stopped as he just notice the black cat in front of him his eyes were very cold. 'Get out of here NOW!' he spatted at them 'Wait just a minute black cat, but we need this place please' Lonlyhook meowed
'no THAT CAT IS A BAD OMEN" the black cat pointed his tail at Eyesbleed
'NOW GET OUT NOW if you don't we'll do it by FORCE!" he spatted, mother and father left with Eyesbleed and they never went back.

'Mom i could of knocked him out with one paw' Eyesbleed said with a spark in his eyes
'GO AWAY!" blowskies shouted at Eyesbleed 'i don't want him it's all his fault, stranded without protection we'll get beaten by cats and torn to bits by dogs' Lonlyhook got up and said “it's all right , trust me well both protect our


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