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Personal Narration: A Short Story
I looked around the pit the stink brunning my nose I found a human ferimer that is somewhat still in good shape I dragged it down with me and bashed the gate once twice and a third time but only a crack I arose once more gathered my air and back down to the depths once twice and three times the gate shattered, and I was free the strong current pulled me in and spit me out like the whale and its spout out
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