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Personal Narrative: Big Rides
When in the car with my brother, bored and wondering where we are going. We ask but we are not tuld what we are doing or how long it would take to get there we just sat and waited for the time to pass with my brouthers. When we started to get closer to the place we start seeing big rides and places for as many people, We were at worlds of fun my parents told me and we thought is was going to be the best thing that would ever existed on earth, when we go park we start walking to gate,
‘Wow this place is huge’ tommy sead. As that approaches the gates to get in. We tried to find the shorted line to in.
‘There are so many people hear tommy’ timmy said to tommy.
‘I know there is a bunch of rides to go on’ said tommy.
Then they got to the front

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