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Personal Narrative: Eliminate All The Run-On Sentences
Directions: Eliminate all the run-on sentences.
1. They walked through the forest, twigs snapping beneath their feet an owl hooted a frog croaked the sounds of the woods were all around them.
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2. While sledding down the hill, Billy lost his hat his friends helped him look for it, but they couldn’t find it they looked at the top of the hill, and they looked at the bottom of the hill it was nowhere to be found.
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