Personal Narrative: Illustrious Night Club
2010 The music was blaring, it was hot and humid, and the smell of sweat and alcohol permeated the air. Collin examined her as she led him up the stairs to the VIP room of the club. She promised him she’d impress him. So far, he wasn’t disappointed. She looked back at him and smiled before she opened the door. She pulled him into the dark room, blindfolded him, and hushed him as he began to protest, telling him she’d be right back. She backed away slowly as he shot her a sinister grin. After several minutes of waiting, he grew impatient, until he heard the door slightly open. He called out her name, only to be answered by a bullet through the head. As Collin bled out, the girl hugged the man with the gun. “You will always be Daddy’s
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“Illustrious Night Club?” Sam asked surprised. “Caroline that’s a 5 star club! How did you get us on the list?’
Caroline smirked, “I have my ways. Happy Birthday, Sam,” She said handing him another gift. He opened the box and pulled out a new blazer. He’d seen this at a mall and begged Caroline but she always refused. At least he knows why now. “Thank you!” He said excitedly, hugging her tightly, “So when are we going?”
She watched his face as he patiently waited to be told more.
“Tonight!” She squealed. His eyes opened wide.
“But we should probably get ready now,” she suggested, “It’s a three hour drive and we have to pick up a couple guests.”
“You’re the best girlfriend anyone could ask for,” Sam said kissing her cheek. 7:32 PM
Charlie and Ali climbed into the car, unsurprisingly already drunk.
“Tonight’s going to be forgettable!” Charlie slurred.
“Don’t you mean unforgettable?” Caroline asked …show more content…
“Your dad? I thought you didn’t talk to him”
I don’t. She gripped the steering wheel.
The rest of the ride was silent except for Charlie’s random giggles. 10:06 PM
They parked a few blocks down from the club because the lots were full.
“I guess Daddy’s admission didn’t come with a parking place,” Ali scoffed.
“Ali-,”
“No Caroline! I thought you changed. 26 years old and you’re still using your dad’s money to satisfy everyone,” Ali grabbed Charlie’s hand, “Come on, we’re taking a bus home.”
Before caroline could stop them, they were already walking. Charlie turned his head giving her an apologetic smile.
“What was that about?” Sam demanded as his phone rang, “Oh, um I have to take this, you go ahead.”
Caroline squeezed his hand and started walking with her heels in hand. He turned away and answered.
“Do you have my money?” The man’s voice boomed.
Sam gulped, “Y-yes.”
“Then why don’t I have it?” He yelled
“I’m on my way, sir, please give me more time,” Sam asked desperately.
“Midnight,” and then he hung up
Sam shoved his phone in his pocket and caught up with Caroline, who was already at the entrance, she always walked
“Illustrious Night Club?” Sam asked surprised. “Caroline that’s a 5 star club! How did you get us on the list?’
Caroline smirked, “I have my ways. Happy Birthday, Sam,” She said handing him another gift. He opened the box and pulled out a new blazer. He’d seen this at a mall and begged Caroline but she always refused. At least he knows why now. “Thank you!” He said excitedly, hugging her tightly, “So when are we going?”
She watched his face as he patiently waited to be told more.
“Tonight!” She squealed. His eyes opened wide.
“But we should probably get ready now,” she suggested, “It’s a three hour drive and we have to pick up a couple guests.”
“You’re the best girlfriend anyone could ask for,” Sam said kissing her cheek. 7:32 PM
Charlie and Ali climbed into the car, unsurprisingly already drunk.
“Tonight’s going to be forgettable!” Charlie slurred.
“Don’t you mean unforgettable?” Caroline asked …show more content…
“Your dad? I thought you didn’t talk to him”
I don’t. She gripped the steering wheel.
The rest of the ride was silent except for Charlie’s random giggles. 10:06 PM
They parked a few blocks down from the club because the lots were full.
“I guess Daddy’s admission didn’t come with a parking place,” Ali scoffed.
“Ali-,”
“No Caroline! I thought you changed. 26 years old and you’re still using your dad’s money to satisfy everyone,” Ali grabbed Charlie’s hand, “Come on, we’re taking a bus home.”
Before caroline could stop them, they were already walking. Charlie turned his head giving her an apologetic smile.
“What was that about?” Sam demanded as his phone rang, “Oh, um I have to take this, you go ahead.”
Caroline squeezed his hand and started walking with her heels in hand. He turned away and answered.
“Do you have my money?” The man’s voice boomed.
Sam gulped, “Y-yes.”
“Then why don’t I have it?” He yelled
“I’m on my way, sir, please give me more time,” Sam asked desperately.
“Midnight,” and then he hung up
Sam shoved his phone in his pocket and caught up with Caroline, who was already at the entrance, she always walked