Personal Narrative-Jack's Memoir

Jack’s Memoir RD A massive battle ship, a bike accident in sunny
Florida, A huge navel jets, Blue Angels, and a fun day in Pensacola. These are my top five memories since the royals won the world series, wait I wasn't even born in 1985! Paragraph 1 Have you ever been on a huge towering battleship? Well I have. On our long drive to Florida we were going through Alabama and went to Mobile Bay. We stopped at the USS Alabama. I’m stunned at the huge hunk of metal thing called a ship as we get out of our car. The massive guns and anti-aircraft guns that would light up the night sky like lightning. The old World War 2 ship smells of rust and must. I almost feel mercy for the people who looked at this ship as the enemy. Some of the parts are rusty. I hear the flapping of a flag in the soft Mobile Bay breeze. I feel the cold hard metal and the chipping paint. I know now why they call this vessel a Destroyer.

Paragraph 2 Have you ever been in a bike accident or been not looking where you are going and run straight into a pole or the curb. Well I feel you, in fact I’ve done that many times. But
I shiver from the cold hard steel with metal bolts coded in eggshell white paint. This was my family's second vacation to Florida, different time different place though. We were in Pensacola this time and right next to the Naval Air Reatecain base! I was so thrilled I ran around the place taking billions of pictures of the towering aircraft and exhibits. I climb around, under, over all of the planes. My sisters are busy texting and sitting on a bench. You can tell they don't really have the same interest as me. Soon though it's time to eat lunch, so what better place to no other than the restaurant that was right there in the base. I get the biggest baddest hot dog you have ever laid eyes on. Chili, cheese, ketchup, relish, and lettuce. It's all there and all