Personal Narrative-Ravon
“AAAAGGGGHHHH!” screams Ravon over the intercom.
Joseph shouts “Help him!”
But it was too late as Ravon had already been sucked out to deep space, screaming and shouting for mercy out of the dark land.
“I’m sorry. I could’ve helped” whispers Mercrey.
The whole team, Joseph, Neptune, Murcrey, and I Doctor Gumshu all told Ravon our sorrows, as if he was still there standing in front of us. At the time we were going to land on the moon, when we got there it was when we started to feel the guilt. They were sad times, trying to live knowing we had failed him. Then we had went to sleep, to prepare for the next mission, without fail.
The next morning we found that Joseph had died on his bunk. We had brought him to the infirmary to find out how …show more content…
We investigated the bodies and talked about who the murderer was. We hadn’t come to a conclusion until I thought that maybe Joseph or someone else could have faked his death and murdered the others. That was the only possible answer we could think of so we left it at that. Later we ate and tried to relax. Neptune had to use the restroom so I waited on the outside of the door. No one had tried to come for me which was very lucky. Neptune had been in the restroom so I checked on her by asking if she was okay but got no answer. Four more times I asked over and over again with no response.The door was locked so I broke it down, knowing she couldn’t be okay. She was dead beside the sink. The vent was broken and a gunshot wound was on the back of her head.
“Now I’m alone. I’m so sorry Neptune.” I told her as if she was alive.
“You’re not alone at all! You never were!” Said a mysterious voice.
“Who are you? Why have you done this?” I shouted
I waited for an answer as I heard footsteps from down the hall, and I could see a figure of a man.
“Ravon!” I whispered, surprised.
He started running three fourths of the way through and I took of sprinting away. He followed me until he trapped me in the space hatch. I picked up whatever I could and hit him with it and ran out. I trapped him in the hatch and locked it. The hatch on the other side opened and I was the one who opened it. Watching him float away, dead. After
Joseph shouts “Help him!”
But it was too late as Ravon had already been sucked out to deep space, screaming and shouting for mercy out of the dark land.
“I’m sorry. I could’ve helped” whispers Mercrey.
The whole team, Joseph, Neptune, Murcrey, and I Doctor Gumshu all told Ravon our sorrows, as if he was still there standing in front of us. At the time we were going to land on the moon, when we got there it was when we started to feel the guilt. They were sad times, trying to live knowing we had failed him. Then we had went to sleep, to prepare for the next mission, without fail.
The next morning we found that Joseph had died on his bunk. We had brought him to the infirmary to find out how …show more content…
We investigated the bodies and talked about who the murderer was. We hadn’t come to a conclusion until I thought that maybe Joseph or someone else could have faked his death and murdered the others. That was the only possible answer we could think of so we left it at that. Later we ate and tried to relax. Neptune had to use the restroom so I waited on the outside of the door. No one had tried to come for me which was very lucky. Neptune had been in the restroom so I checked on her by asking if she was okay but got no answer. Four more times I asked over and over again with no response.The door was locked so I broke it down, knowing she couldn’t be okay. She was dead beside the sink. The vent was broken and a gunshot wound was on the back of her head.
“Now I’m alone. I’m so sorry Neptune.” I told her as if she was alive.
“You’re not alone at all! You never were!” Said a mysterious voice.
“Who are you? Why have you done this?” I shouted
I waited for an answer as I heard footsteps from down the hall, and I could see a figure of a man.
“Ravon!” I whispered, surprised.
He started running three fourths of the way through and I took of sprinting away. He followed me until he trapped me in the space hatch. I picked up whatever I could and hit him with it and ran out. I trapped him in the hatch and locked it. The hatch on the other side opened and I was the one who opened it. Watching him float away, dead. After