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Personal Narrative: The Horse
I am Felix and I am 20 years old I have just abandon my farm and I have 8 gold nuggets and I need money to survive.The winds in the valley where strong and I got dirt,sand and I am bleeding from my leg a rock came tumbling from the hill and hit me in the knee I am stranded though my map got burned because of a fire that started last night from lighting...you know my dad died of being stranded when he was in war on the way to the battlefield his horse got out of control and started to run to the middle of nowhere he had to kill the horse to stop it from running into a ravine.The horse was dead on the ground My dad started walking and he was stranded but the rest of the story still remains a mystery to me and the rest of the Roman army.It's been

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