Personal Narrative: The Rise And Fall Of The Ice Castle
The outside smelled liked autumn. The wind was gentle. As my friend and I walked, the leaf crunched below our feet. When we reached the park it transformed. One playground became the ice castle. That had snow guard guarding all around the castle. The ponds sparkle from the sun that was surrounding the castle. As for the other playground lit up with fire, from stone to stone. I raced the fire queen to my castle.
She always would try to take my kingdom. Perhaps she was jealous of my kingdom. My kingdom had fine people. It was twice as big as the fire queen. Beautiful on the inside and out. Many wanted to come to my kingdom but they had to pass the wall of kindness.
Once, the fire queens try to past throw to take over my kingdom. She broke the …show more content…
We both sprint down the hill with our sward in our hands. Snapped, the sward broke in half. But she keeps on charging me. She hit my hand with her sward. My hand throbbing in pain. It had gotten more serious. I gave her a look of determination to win this battle. She throw down her sward and runs by a tree to get a new one. It was much bigger than mine, when that snapped and half. She had fear in her eyes. For I am the ice queen. I would never hurt anyone.
She puts up a white flag. After that she wouldn’t try to take my kingdom again. As, I marched off the battle flied she look at me with even more hate. When she looked at me like that I had a feeling that wouldn’t be the last time we battled.
She throw a sward at me trying to stab me. The wind seemed still and the sky went dark blue. The street light turned on and dogs were called into their owners’ home, rudely interruption our imagination. We know our adventure was over and had to leave.
We would come back to where we left off next time we visited our imagination. We walked back up to the playground and onto the street, heading home. Most people see the park as just playground, swings, and slides. As, I see it as a castle, battle field, and my own
She always would try to take my kingdom. Perhaps she was jealous of my kingdom. My kingdom had fine people. It was twice as big as the fire queen. Beautiful on the inside and out. Many wanted to come to my kingdom but they had to pass the wall of kindness.
Once, the fire queens try to past throw to take over my kingdom. She broke the …show more content…
We both sprint down the hill with our sward in our hands. Snapped, the sward broke in half. But she keeps on charging me. She hit my hand with her sward. My hand throbbing in pain. It had gotten more serious. I gave her a look of determination to win this battle. She throw down her sward and runs by a tree to get a new one. It was much bigger than mine, when that snapped and half. She had fear in her eyes. For I am the ice queen. I would never hurt anyone.
She puts up a white flag. After that she wouldn’t try to take my kingdom again. As, I marched off the battle flied she look at me with even more hate. When she looked at me like that I had a feeling that wouldn’t be the last time we battled.
She throw a sward at me trying to stab me. The wind seemed still and the sky went dark blue. The street light turned on and dogs were called into their owners’ home, rudely interruption our imagination. We know our adventure was over and had to leave.
We would come back to where we left off next time we visited our imagination. We walked back up to the playground and onto the street, heading home. Most people see the park as just playground, swings, and slides. As, I see it as a castle, battle field, and my own