Personal Narrative-The Roller Coaster

Tick, Tick,Tick went the sound of the coaster as I watched it go up the 300 foot drop. Tick Tick Tick. The screams were overtaking the sound of everything. Blood was rushing through my head as I watched the blue cart zoom around the track. My uncle trying to talk me into it.
"Come on" he said
"No", I replied
"It will be fun",he said
"NO" I said
"It is the only ride at Knott's that we haven't been on", he said
"NOOOO" I said
"Were not coming back" he said
"So" , I said
"It will be fun",he said
"How do you know that", I replied
"Uh....." He said
"See" I said
"Nevermind that" he replied
"Fine I'll come" I said

After being talked into this I asked him, “Why?” He shrugged his shoulders and said, "Eh, but you got in line no turning back.”
The
I now found out why he said but your head back. The cart zoomed off like it had been shot out of a cannon ! BOOM ! We zoomed down the track. The screams were terrible I felt a migraine coming. I could see everything the whole park even my parents waving. the cart was almost at the top when it started that antagonizing tick,tick,tick. I was so scared i nearly wet my pants. I was almost at the top. I said a prayer and hoped for the best. zoom i went down the track it was up and down,side to side for two minutes. I felt like i was going to hurl.
The cart was almost at the stop I was so happy it was over. i got out of the blue cart walked over to the fence and stayed there to regain my balance. "Whew it was over". Just then my uncle said," wanna go on it again"
"Heck no",I replied
"come on", my uncle said
"seriously", I replied
"yes, come on", my uncle