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Personal Narrative: What Shaped Me
What Shaped Me We are all who we are for many reasons and some none at all. We all have molded into something because of someone or something. Wether we know who, what or why is something we mite never know. Luckily i know the answer to all those questions. Sports. They are what made me who i am and it wasn’t so much the sport but the coach, my team and the people who supported me. I started Track and Cross Country in junior high with absolutely know idea how much it would end up affecting my life. Once I got into high school I actually started to get more into it. My coach was amazing, I made tons of new friends and my mom was more supportive then ever. Except I can honestly say I wouldn't be where I am with my running if it wasn't

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