STATEMENT OF THE PROBLEM: According to the Centers for Disease Control and Prevention, in 2005, there were 20.6 million cases of diabetes among people aged 20 years to 44 years; according to the American Diabetes Association in 2011, there were 25.6 million cases of diabetes among people aged 20 years to 44 years.
GENERAL PURPOSE: To persuade
SPECIFIC PURPOSE: To persuade my audience to engage in walking for 30 minutes a day to prevent diabetes.
CENTRAL IDEA: My audience should walk for 30 minutes a day because doing so will help them from getting diabetes and other chronic health diseases.
Attention Grabber: Isolation, Denial, depression, guilt, anger, embarrassment, and dependence, these are the emotions …show more content…
that are experienced among people with diabetes. Vivian, a 17 year old quiet spoken girl who has gone through these emotions. She began feeling really miserable, throwing up, really thirsty all of the time. One day, after falling into a diabetic coma, she was lying in a hospital bed and the doctors were explaining that her pancreas had stopped functioning and I was no longer producing insulin. This was serious. She was zoned out. She asked herself, “Diabetes? How could that be possible? And why her?” This could happen to any of us, and we may be the unlucky victim. As college students, we live in a world where everything is convenient, from cars, to fast food, causing us to be more sedentary and unhealthy. It is easy for us to slip into a sedentary lifestyle with no or irregular physical activity. With physical inactivity among threatening our well beings, and precipitating deadly diseases as diabetes, we need a change to better our lives.
Problem:
According to the Centers for Disease Control and Prevention, in 2005, there were 20.6 million cases of diabetes among people aged 20 years to 44 years; according to the American Diabetes Association in 2011, there were 25.6 million cases of diabetes among people aged 20 years to 44 years.
A. So what is Diabetes?
a. According to American Diabetes Association, diabetes is a disorder of sugar metabolism: It is when high blood glucose level occurs. There are 3 types of diabetes.
b. A. Type 1 diabetes, or juvenile diabetes, is when there is no production of insulin-a hormone that guides sugar into cells and help convert it into energy. No insulin means no control of blood sugar. Only 5 percent of all diabetes cases are type 1 and mostly occur in young adults.
a. The US Department of Education: Digest of Education Statistics, states that Each fall, 2.3 million freshmen enroll in institutes of higher education in the U.S. Of these, 7, 700 will have type 1 diabetes, based on an estimated prevalence rate of 1 of every 300.
B. Type 2 is when you don’t produce enough insulin, or your insulin is not working properly. Cells have become resistant to the insulin is not very effective.
a. The ADA describes Type 2 as the most common form of diabetes. In adults, type 2 diabetes, a condition that can be prevented, accounts for 90–95% of all diagnosed case.
C. Stress Diabetes: using medication’s especially water pills (diuretics). It can often disappear when the stress is relieved.
D. A 2007-2009 national survey data from American Diabetes Association states that for people diagnosed with diabetes aged 20 years or older, 12.6% of blacks, 11.8% of Hispanics, 8.4% of Asian Americans, and 7.1% of whites.
E. Causes of Diabetes?
1. According to Tom and Gena Metcalf, the authors of Diabetes, there are hereditary and environmental factors involved, and lifestyle.
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For type 2 diabetes, there is stronger link to family history than type 1. If both parents have it, there is 50 % of chance of getting it. If one parent has it, the risk is almost 3 times the general population risk.
b. Environmental factors are: Dr. James Warram, a lecturer in epidemiology at Harvard School of Public states that one trigger might be cold weather.
2. Also affecting is age, obesity, lack of exercise.
F. The Symptoms of diabetes are many factors.
1. Type 1 and 2 diabetes people can have blurred vision, urinary tract infections, blindness, foot ulcers that leads to limb amputations.
2. Symptoms can develop suddenly (over days or weeks), or gradually (over several years).
a. Jane 47 year-old is a triple amputee, have undergone operations to remove both her legs and one arm due to Type 1 diabetes. She faces the prospect of losing her remaining arm in the near future because of diabetes. Imagine not having your legs, what a depressing life that would be.
Solution:
A. First option, you can do nothing about it.
1. Severe consequences can occur with uncontrolled diabetes.
a. You can get foot ulcers, blindness, leg amputations, and even death.
b. According to the National Diabetes Information Clearinghouse, in 2006, about 65,700 lower-limb amputations were performed in people with …show more content…
diabetes..
B. Second option is taking insulin therapy or oral medications.
1. For Type 1 diabetes, injectable insulin is used.
2. According to Doctor Diane Elliot in Oregon health Science University, There are different types of oral drugs used to manage Type 2 diabetics:
3. Some side effects with metformin are nausea, vomiting, gas, bloating, diarrhea and loss of appetite.
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The side effects and the cost of such medicine shows that medication might be at an expense physically and mentally to diabetics.
a. It can cost a lot of money. The Website Cost Helper, what are people paying explains that for patients without health insurance, diabetes medication costs $200 to $500 or more a month for a multi-drug regimen.
C. The third option, an important aspect in managing diabetes that doesn’t cost us a dime is exercise.
1. Hippocrates said “Walking is man's best medicine." Walking is one of the easiest and least expensive ways without needing any equipment’s to stay physically fit. There are no side effects for walking. Just good results.
2. According to Linn Goldberg, doctor and author of the Healing power of exercise, walking helps the body becomes more sensitive to insulin’s action, so sugar is more easily removed from bloodstream and blood glucose levels can normalize.
3. Expert from the National institutes of Health all advise 30 minutes or more of moderate to intense walking on most days of the week. You can walk in two 15 minute segments or three 10 minute. You can take a walk on the park, or on your treadmill.
a. The cost is only 30 minutes from you day, while the reward outweighs it, saving your life from complications of
diabetes.
Visualization:
D. Here are two stories of diabetics who chose two different paths to manage their diabetes.
A. Choosing to walk 30 minutes a day can help you manage diabetes and even combat other diseases. You might know Della Reese, remember her in the TV series “Touched by an Angel” is America’s best loved celebrities diagnosed with diabetes Type 2. Her activities include walking on a treadmill to manage her diabetes. Now she parks a block away and walk. She knew one thing for sure that “ignorance and fear would kill you quicker than any disease. Now she is in charge of her diabetes and still living her entertainment life.
B. Not walking 30 minutes a days to control your diabetes is a big mistake:
Remember Jane, the 47 year old triple amputee who has failed to understand how deadly uncontrolled diabetes was, and now faces the possibility of losing her remaining arm in the future? She says 'Diabetes is a condition that has to be respected otherwise the implications are horrendous.”
Call to Action: So I want to urge you to start walking 30 minutes today, for a better tomorrow. If you walk regularly for 30 minutes a day, it can considerably help you control your diabetes and help you be fit and feel better. After surveying the class, I gathered that most of us would want to choose exercise for preference to prevent and or manage diabetes. Just realize that each mile a sedentary person walks will add 21 minutes to their life and save society 24 cents in medical and other costs according to the Rand Corporation, a well-known California based “think tank formed to offer research and analysis. So put on some comfortable shoes, and start walking 30 minutes a day.