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张孟劼
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Title: We must end our addiction to social networking.
General purpose: To persuade
Specific Purpose: To persuade my audience that actions need to be taken to stop the addiction to social networking. Thesis Statement: Being too addicted to social networking can cause some serious problems, so it is necessary to stop it. Main Points: Ⅰ.Addiction to social networking has caused serious problems. A. Addiction to social networking leads to distraction while working. B. Addiction to social networking makes us feel isolated in real life. C. Addiction to social networking weakens our ability to think. Ⅱ.Some factors contributes out addiction to social networking. A. Technology development gives us the chance. B. Psychological need to express ourselves adds to the obsession. Ⅲ.Actions need to be taken to stop the addiction to social networking. A. We can download some app to force ourselves to be focused. B. We should arrange our time for efficiently. C. We should engage ourselves in real-life socializing.
INTRODUCTION
Ⅰ.(Attention getter) How many of you know what ‘s the picture I showed on the screen?Actually, it’s an APP for Apple and Android users.It was developed to force ourselves to focus on our study, cutting our obsession with our phone.It works very simple but also very rude.At first, you should set a time, such as 20 min, or 1 h, during which, you expect yourself to focus on your study without any connection to you phone. Once you break the law you set yourself, immediately, the app will automatically send a message to renren, to inform everyone that you fail to concentrate and seek contempt and supervision. Ⅱ.(Relevancy statement) But why we must use the app to force ourselves to