Proofreading
Answer to question one: Writing Skills – Revising, editing and proofreading
To all members of the Task Team
During the “Know your status campaign” at the Amalgamated Filtration Industries you all out did yourselves with the service you provided to the public. I was very proud and appreciative with all the work and support you up in.
By being consistent, hard working and dedicated, myself and senior management I know and trust that the objective of this campaign will be a success. We have noticed each and every member on Sunday doing their best to convey the concept of development across to the public which we are very proud. I am greatly thankful for your dedication and devote to work. Your enthusiasm should be taken up and emulated by others who work in similar roles and organizations.
Many employees in the company may know their HIV/AIDS status and may want to act on it accordingly. It is therefore our job to continue with the excellent service we provide and ensure that the confidentiality of the people be respected.
Thank you all for your on going efforts of saving lives in South Africa.
Johannes Seeslaar
Answer to question two: Meetings
Linwood Steel Manufacturing – Protection Service Department
Minutes of a meeting of the Protection Service Department held in Clover Boardroom on 21 October 2009
1. Welcome
The Chairperson opened the meeting and welcomed everyone that was present.
2. Present
Ms Stein (Chairperson)
Ms Nthabiseng Mothong (Secretary)
10 staff members as per the attached attendance register.
3. Apologies
Mr Piet Vrede
4. Minutes of the previous meeting
Minutes for the previous meeting of 21 September 2009 has been circulated and were taken as read. The minutes were approved.
5. Matters arising
5.1. Punctuality (point 6.3 of the meeting of 21 September)
There is still some staff that has ignored our discussion in the previous meeting
To all members of the Task Team
During the “Know your status campaign” at the Amalgamated Filtration Industries you all out did yourselves with the service you provided to the public. I was very proud and appreciative with all the work and support you up in.
By being consistent, hard working and dedicated, myself and senior management I know and trust that the objective of this campaign will be a success. We have noticed each and every member on Sunday doing their best to convey the concept of development across to the public which we are very proud. I am greatly thankful for your dedication and devote to work. Your enthusiasm should be taken up and emulated by others who work in similar roles and organizations.
Many employees in the company may know their HIV/AIDS status and may want to act on it accordingly. It is therefore our job to continue with the excellent service we provide and ensure that the confidentiality of the people be respected.
Thank you all for your on going efforts of saving lives in South Africa.
Johannes Seeslaar
Answer to question two: Meetings
Linwood Steel Manufacturing – Protection Service Department
Minutes of a meeting of the Protection Service Department held in Clover Boardroom on 21 October 2009
1. Welcome
The Chairperson opened the meeting and welcomed everyone that was present.
2. Present
Ms Stein (Chairperson)
Ms Nthabiseng Mothong (Secretary)
10 staff members as per the attached attendance register.
3. Apologies
Mr Piet Vrede
4. Minutes of the previous meeting
Minutes for the previous meeting of 21 September 2009 has been circulated and were taken as read. The minutes were approved.
5. Matters arising
5.1. Punctuality (point 6.3 of the meeting of 21 September)
There is still some staff that has ignored our discussion in the previous meeting