First, if assault weapons were banned law enforcement would …show more content…
Hawaii’s and Maryland’s, for example, deal only with pistols”(Richman). In some states assault weapons are banned and only allow pistols. Their would not be a school shooting with a pistol.
Evidence: Based on the state the more population the more firearm crime is committed. “The variable crime is the number of firearm-related violent crimes committed in a state, relative to the state's population”(Kahane).
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Restate Position (rephrase): Assault weapon should not be banned, there should be a more stricter law for people trying to purchase a assault weapon. With that assault weapons should be used for dangerous situations.
Connect to your hook: When someone is in a dangerous situation when your in your older day and they need to protect yourself there would not be any defence.
Call to Action: The constitution or mayor of a certain state should make the decision based on the crime rate or death ratio buy assault