Queenie
Example 2 (Exemplary)
Closely around 1 a.m., Queenie Volupides came home from a party that was at the Oxford Country Club. When she left the home earlier, anger filled her body from the fight that occurred between the two before she went to the club. She supposedly found her husband, Arthur, at the foot of the stairs still holding on to his drinking glass that appeared to be empty. She claimed that he was coming down for another drink, yet it is hard to believe that she knows that since she came home to him lying there. Friends were invited to the Volupides' home for one last drink after the club, but
Queenie arrived there 10 minutes before the women. When the guests arrived, Queenie told them that she found Arthur and didn't know what to do.
The evidence that I have collected goes to the obvious answer to the "Is she lying or is she telling the truth?" question. The scene showed that
Arthur was still holding his glass. As a rule, when people become unconscious, their body becomes loose which would result to Arthur letting go of his glass. Secondly, Arthur was lying at the bottom of the stairs, face-up, with his feet propped on the stairs. As a rule, when people fall down the stairs they land face-down. The third thing I found was that the rug was not messed up in any way. As a rule, when people fall on rugs, the rug gathers together instead of staying spread out. Fourth, Arthur's clothes were not messed up of any kind. As a rule, when people fall, their clothes get shuffled and pulled up. Lastly, the mirror and the candlesticks that are lined up on the staircase wall is not messed up, neither is the railing. As a rule, when people fall they hold on to anything around them to help them stay up.
With the evidence that I have come upon, I think Queenie should be arrested. I would believe she needs to spend at least eighteen years in jail for counts of pre-meditative murder. The gathered information on that night leads me to believe that Queenie got home
Closely around 1 a.m., Queenie Volupides came home from a party that was at the Oxford Country Club. When she left the home earlier, anger filled her body from the fight that occurred between the two before she went to the club. She supposedly found her husband, Arthur, at the foot of the stairs still holding on to his drinking glass that appeared to be empty. She claimed that he was coming down for another drink, yet it is hard to believe that she knows that since she came home to him lying there. Friends were invited to the Volupides' home for one last drink after the club, but
Queenie arrived there 10 minutes before the women. When the guests arrived, Queenie told them that she found Arthur and didn't know what to do.
The evidence that I have collected goes to the obvious answer to the "Is she lying or is she telling the truth?" question. The scene showed that
Arthur was still holding his glass. As a rule, when people become unconscious, their body becomes loose which would result to Arthur letting go of his glass. Secondly, Arthur was lying at the bottom of the stairs, face-up, with his feet propped on the stairs. As a rule, when people fall down the stairs they land face-down. The third thing I found was that the rug was not messed up in any way. As a rule, when people fall on rugs, the rug gathers together instead of staying spread out. Fourth, Arthur's clothes were not messed up of any kind. As a rule, when people fall, their clothes get shuffled and pulled up. Lastly, the mirror and the candlesticks that are lined up on the staircase wall is not messed up, neither is the railing. As a rule, when people fall they hold on to anything around them to help them stay up.
With the evidence that I have come upon, I think Queenie should be arrested. I would believe she needs to spend at least eighteen years in jail for counts of pre-meditative murder. The gathered information on that night leads me to believe that Queenie got home