Thank you for the feedback on my Outline for ME #3. I understand that I should have expounded more on the types of harm created by certain places and events surrounding the ocean, and that I should have supported my argument by discussing regulations that need to be implemented in order to protect the ocean from chemical, plastic, and oil pollution. Anyhow, the reason for this email is that I am thinking about changing my third essay topic to instead discuss the ethics of film director Quentin Tarantino's recent decision to attend and speak at a police brutality rally.
I would greatly appreciate any feedback given at your convenience on the following thesis before I completely change my topic. My working thesis is, “Quentin
Tarantino’s decision to attend and speak at a police brutality rally was completely ethical despite his fame and the controversy surrounding police brutality because he is a human being, American citizen, and highly acclaimed film director and screenwriter known for his aestheticization of violence.” I plan to discuss the importance of him speaking out as each of the previously stated individuals in an attempt to prove his decision was moral.
Thank you,
Charity