REAL ARGUMENTATIVE RESEARCH ESSAY PROJECT
ID : 1047805
NAME : Mohammed Obaid Hammad
TOPIC : excess weight fees in airplane should be banned
Instructor : Mrs. Beena
Date : 23 / 5 / 2015
Argumentative essay
Excess weight fees in airplanes should be banned
FOR
AGAINST
Excess weight fees are discriminative practice.
Difficult to set on a single seat.
Difficulty to judge seat fitting while purchasing ticket.
Use extension seat built.
More than 15% of adult are suffering from obesity.
Can’t put down the armrest.
Overweight is sensitive subject for obese people.
More comfortable for them.
Overweight people already pay emotionally.
Uncomfortable for their neighbors.
Effective of rights and freedom in modern society.
Reduces risk in case of abnormal movement of airplane.
Thesis statement: Excess weight fees charged by the airlines are a harsh and discriminative practice that injures self-esteem of the individuals for whom weight is already a sensitive issue.
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Paragraph 1:
# When does a Passenger of airplane considered as overweight? (Appleton, 2009).
# Excess weight fees make their travelling safer (Rodriguez, 2012).
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Paragraph 2:
# One of six adults suffer from obesity (Tip for the weight challenged travel, 2015).
# Is the person responsible for his overweight? (Tip for the weight challenged travel, 2015).
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Paragraph 3:
# Overweight people can’t fit in a single seat / discrimination based on appearance
# Uncomfortable for them and for their neighbors / difficult to overcome obesity
# Additional ticket solve the problem / finance effected in addition to emotional suffering
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